Assignment 1:
Text 1:
Cover Letters for Camera Operator Jobs
Job Application
Martin,
Job Application
Martin,
1234, West 67 Street,
Carlisle, MA 01741,
(123)-456 7890.
Date: 1st april, 2009
Mr. Ferguson,
Personel Manager,
ABC TV12345,
Park Avenue South,
New York,
USA 12345..
Dear sir,
I was informed that there is a vacancy in your office for the post of camera operator. If this is so, I wish to offer myself as a candidate for the post you offered.
I am experienced in this field and am looking for new employment in your city. I have been a camera operator for ABC Television and for the CDF Educational Film Company.
For your consideration, I enclose my brief personal data, some important documents and a recent photograph. I shall be highly obliged if you could consider me for the post you offered.
Sincerely Yours
Text 2:
Dear Jane.
I hope you are feeling better Are you able to sit in the garden and enjoy the sunshine.?
We all miss you in the office and look forward to your return. There have been a few changes since you went into hospital. Eric Johnson has now retired (lucky man) and Matthew has taken over Eric's job. He is struggling at the moment. He hopes you will return soon to rescue him from the muddle.
I thought you would like the book I'm sending you with this letter I saw it in the bookshop and thought it would make you laugh. I know you 've always wanted to live in Greece. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it and find time to read it before you return to work.
Take it easy and look after yourself I'll write again soon.
Best regards
*This is an informal letter to a friend. It is very different from the first one. Sheila use contractions e.g. I'll, I'm and you 've. Even if Shiela use the more formal salution 'Dear' there is no heading including date or address and she use an more informal closing 'Best regards'. I think this closing means that Sheila know Jane fairly well.
Assignemnt 2:
Formal:
My Diary
Therese Bengtsson
Date: April 20, 2010
Dear Diary
I think I want to tell you about something that might seem unfamiliar to you. I have never written about love before but now I want to share this with you. I am now in love with a perfect boy. He is marvelous and maybe it would not last long but as long as it does I am very delighted.
Sincerely Yours,
Therese
Informal:
Dear Leila
How are you? I just couldn't wait until seeing you on Saturday, I have to tell you this amazing news right now! I'm in love. Yes, you read it right. I 've a boyfriend now and he's so fantastic and good-looking. You and I have so much to talk about!
Love,
Therese
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Therese Bengtsson 2010-04-20
Good job Therese! You have picked good examples of formal and informal writing.
SvaraRaderaThe date is typically given like this in formal letters: 1 April 2009 (British), or April 1, 2009 (American) (names of months are always capitalized in English)
No punctuation after American ZIP codes
More correct: "I am experienced in this field and looking for..." or "I am experienced in this field and I am looking for..."
Your own comments: This is a formal letter and it is also a job application. In other words, the letter is the application. (Not "a letter to an application")
"Martin/he USES" (third person singular form of the verb)
The informal letter has some non-standard features which seem unusual.
"Dear Jane,
I hope you are feeling better. Are you able to sit in the garden and enjoy the sunshine?" (Even in informal letters, I think native speakers tend to use standard punctuation)
"Shelia USES/KNOWS" (third person singular verb form)
"uses A more informal"
Your own formal and informal versions of the same text are splendid!
Only one thing "maybe it WILL not last long" (future)
Good job!